Oh, and by the way, cool with the horizontal stroke through the Øø. It works very well. But the æ needs to share the middle stem, right now it looks too much like a seperate a and e ;)
This is more like it. Excellent angles, and a very coherent flow.
Have you thought of perhaps making the 'o' and 'O' with a rounder corner like the top left part of the 'e' or the 'p'.
ALso the 'S' doesn't look like it slants. Perhaps add a slight down tip at the top and bottom end.
What do you think of the numbers?
They look a bit 'wonky' to me. Especially 6 & 9.
The * is particularly brilliant.
The 'S' and 's' are still bugging me. I think it's because the descenders are 90 degrees vertical, when every other letter are italicised. Here are a few suggestions. I've basically taken the angles from the '8'.
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Have you thought of perhaps making the 'o' and 'O' with a rounder corner like the top left part of the 'e' or the 'p'.
ALso the 'S' doesn't look like it slants. Perhaps add a slight down tip at the top and bottom end.
What do you think of the numbers?
They look a bit 'wonky' to me. Especially 6 & 9.
The * is particularly brilliant.
Also a big thank you for your suggestions. I've already made a few small changes.
@CMunk
Thanks also to you for the comment on the æ.
You are great and your suggestions are very helpful.
Merci : )
Thank you very much for the compliment !
db
very nice approach to a slanted typeface. love it!
Thank you so much for the star, I am delighted!
@ p2pnut /
You are always welcome. Thanks for the comment!
herzlichstes thank you : )
@ four / thanks for the "p" : )
@ h1k765
Thank you for that – and yes, I took this picture for an exhibition…
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