Not sure about the bowl of the a ... it looks a bit lost compared to the strength and boldness of the other characters. Whilst it is the right thickness, the horizontal cross of the t 'looks' too thin (on the right side) - perhaps it would look more proportionate if it was a wee bit shorter.
Thank you all for the nice constructive feedback. I have enlarged the bowl of the a and narrowed the t a bit. I am going to make some more punktuation now.
@Frodo7, there is no brickstacking; it's only filters.
Thank you for the top pick, this makes me want to work more on it. I've just changed the apostrophes and quote signs since this was created before the macaroni-bricks. I really should finish the greek and cyrillic sets.
@3moDuDe: Thank you, it's one of those where you can see that it's a long and a short s, and that looks less like a beta.
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Not sure about the bowl of the a ... it looks a bit lost compared to the strength and boldness of the other characters. Whilst it is the right thickness, the horizontal cross of the t 'looks' too thin (on the right side) - perhaps it would look more proportionate if it was a wee bit shorter.
Still gets a 10/10 :)
I too find the t's crossbar too long.
@Frodo7, there is no brickstacking; it's only filters.
Love the l,m, k is really great
@3moDuDe: Thank you, it's one of those where you can see that it's a long and a short s, and that looks less like a beta.
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