Oh Dear, oh Dear!

You can't just swap glyphs at will. It renders the text unreadible. I could not decipher "the quick brown fox jumps over...".
Let's start with the 3rd letter in your alphabet: Ч. Following your logic of "transcribing" it should be rather the Ц instead. (Ц = ts in Enlish, like in "sits, gets, tzatziki"; Ч = ch in English in words "chip, child, chop")
4th letter: Д, another poor choice. In some cases Д = D of English, like in the words "day, Dave, Madison". However, depending on which vowel follows it, it could be a somewhat softened sound with no English equivalent I can think of.
8th letter: Х. Again, this has no equivalent in English. It is somewhere between the H and K.
10th letter: Ж. This has the English equvalent in words such as "measure, pleasure, genre". So, it obviously doesn't really fit here. Well, I could go on until dawn. For more information see the chart in wikipedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Russian_alphabet). It is a bit simplified, but a good start nevertheless.

Putting aside phonetics, I quite like some of your letters. The Э is very nice, and the diaeresis too.

Upset me? Not the least. Nor was my intention to discourage you in any way. On the contrary. Keep up the good work, and learn as many languages as you can.

hey :)

what languages are you currently learning ? i live in australia , so i have a similar "disadvantage" to you , i suppose ... i've never known anyone who knows omniglot too , just made my day haha :D