So quick ! Personally I prefered the other one. Maybe take a little more time.
I have a real problem with the "far west" I. And I would have thickened the thin segments in the letters with openings (A D O P Q R).
I think you should take time to give this font a real autonomy from the other one.
But it is just a suggestion. Do as YOU feel, it is YOUR creation.
R and Q are awesome. Nevertheless, I keep thinking you would improve your design by clarifying your own rules (width of the strokes, height of the loops...), generalizing them and choosing between fatness and black & white.
More blocky than the first
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I have a real problem with the "far west" I. And I would have thickened the thin segments in the letters with openings (A D O P Q R).
I think you should take time to give this font a real autonomy from the other one.
But it is just a suggestion. Do as YOU feel, it is YOUR creation.
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